Monday, June 4, 2007

TPONTP PART 2 CHAPTER 1!

Spider Lake, Wisconsin; June 9th 2006
There was a light breeze on this chilly summer night. The moon lit up the sky and was reflecting on the surface of the calm waters of the lake. The only noises to be heard were the sounds of crickets chirping in the night.
larry was a fifty three year old man that loved to go out fishing. He had just bought a house by the lake a few months ago for him and his dog Rufus. Larry decided to go out fishing the night before the big fishing tournament. He grabbed his gear and chained Rufus up outside while he was gone. The motor of his boat rumbled as he started it up. He drove around the lake cutting through the calm water, casting off small waves behind his boat. The breeze was blowing through his short greying brown hair. Once he found the perfect spot to fish, he stopped his boat. Grabbing his fishing pole with his lucky lure on it, he walked to the front of the boat. He swung back the pole and whiped it forward releasing the line. The whisping sound traveling off into the distance as the line was cutting through the night air. Then he heard the light splash of the lure making contact with the water. Just plopping in and slowly sinking to the bottom of the lake. Before it could reach the bottom, he started to reel in the line. Not too slow that it would get snagged on weeds, but slow enough to attract the fish attention. The lure made it back to the pole with out any fish, so he casted it out again. All was quiet and he patiently repeated this prossess, for it calmed him down. He was reeling in his ump-teenth cast and felt a light tug on the line, then another. The tention of the line let him know that he finally caught a fish. He reeled it in carefully, so he wouldn't break the line. The fish surfaced as it got closer to the boat and was putting up a struggle. When the fish was by the boat, Larry reached down and pulled the fish onto the boat. He was satisfied with his catch, and put it in a bucket filled with lake water. He was getting ready to cast his line out again, but the boat started to rock back and forth. He figured it was the fish hitting the bottom of his boat. There was a flashlight on his council, that he used to see in the water. He picked up the light and walked over to the edge of the boat and shined the light into the water. Unfortunatly the water wasn't clear, so he could only see a few feet down. He then saw the largest bass that he'd ever seen before. The boat started to rock some more, so he turned around to get his pole and saw a person standing right in front of him. The presence startled him causing him to trip and fall to the floor of the boat. He looked up and yelled, but it only lasted for a few seconds.
The next morning thirty seven year old Jason had just finished his breakfast, when he heard his neighbor's dog barking. He walked over to the window in his kitchen and saw that the dog was barking at something by the lake. Jason walked outside and over by the dog to pet him.
Jason- Hey Rufus! Have you been out here all night? *Petting the dog*
The dog started to wimper and Jason turned around to see what was wrong. Larry's boat drifted onto the shore of the lake between their properties. Jason Noticed that Larry's car was still in his gravel drive way on a work day. He slowly walked down to the shore and saw flies swarming around the boat. There was a strange smell in the air, that got stronger the closer he got to the boat. Jason looked into the boat, turned around and threw up his breakfast. He then ran to the house to call the cops. Rufus sat there in his yard howling up at clouds. He was now a lost puppy, without his owner.
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June 8,2007
The Impala was driving down an empty road. The sky was a little cloudy and the sun was hidden behind some of the clouds. Trees were passing by the windows and the road was like a rollercoaster. It went up and down, and had turns every which way.
Dean- This isn't right.
Sam- *Looking at a map* What?
Dean- We should have stayed in Watseka and told Alex the truth.
Sam- *Looking over to Dean* That's not any of our business! We just happend to stumble opon that information! *Looking back at the map* Besides, Bobby needs our help.
Dean- Sam, I'm telling you! I think we should have stayed with Alex to tell her the truth about the necklace and her birthday.
Sam- Dean. For the last time, I'm telling YOU! Bobby needed our help. You know just as well as I do that saving people is more important than telling Alex....that.
Dean- It's not right to keep it from her, Sam! She should know! I would want to know if I was in her spot!
Sam- Even after everyone that you cared about was murdered by a guy that you thought was your friend?
Dean- I understand that it's not the best time to bring it up, but if it's going to protect her then I think it might be a good idea to tell her.
Sam- I'll tell you what. Once we're done helping Bobby, we can drive back to Watseka and tell her.
Dean- Fine.
Sam- Of course that means you'll have to go through Alex's dad.
Dean- I can't believe he called Dad a bad parent, when he's the one keeping a secret from his daughter.
Sam- That's not exactly something you WANT to tell your kids.
Dean- *Sighing* I guess your right.
Sam- See? I'm always right.
Dean- What ever you say geek boy.
Sam just rolled his eyes went back to looking at the map.
Dean- So, what exactly did Bobby say about this hunt?
Sam- Apperently once every year on June tenth, a boat is found floating on shore of Spider Lake and the owner is dismembered. It started three years ago.
Dean- So we just gotta find out what's going on before the tenth, and stop it from happening again. Sounds simple enough.
Sam- Dean. it's the eigth! We have a exactly fourty eight hours to stop this thing!
Dean- Is it ever simple?
Sam- Make a left up ahead.
Dean- So why does Bobby need our help?
Sam- He's not sure what's the cause of the killings, because so far there hasn't been any witnesses.
Dean- So let me get this straight! We have forty eight hours to figure out what's killing these people and stop it from happening?!
Sam- And if we mess up, somebody else dies and we have to wait a year to try again.
Dean- That's just.....super.
Dean made the left turn onto a gravel road. The rocks were being kicked up under the tires as they drove down the road.
Dean- Dude, where's the civilization? I havn't seen a single house for the past hour!
Sam- Maybe they heard that you were coming to town.
Dean- Is that suposed to be funny?
Sam- Hey! I can be funny! Remember the time I super-glued your hand to your beer bottle?
Dean- That wasn't funny! That was very painful! How far away is this place that Bobby told us to meet him at any way?
Sam- *Laughing* It should be just a few more miles right up this road.
Dean- Seriously! Where are-WHOA!!
Dean Slammed his brakes on the gravel road and the car skidded before coming to a stop. Sam and Dean were staring out the window at what was blocking their path.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

oh, I like it so Far :D

peacejojo said...

Thanks! I will try to post more soon!

Anonymous said...

fawsome skippy!

peacejojo said...

Thanks again Spike!! It may seem a little slow at first, but there will be suspence sometime! lol

Anonymous said...

Hey PJ!!! :) :D :)

More???? Is there more???