Tuesday, June 12, 2007

TPONTP PART 2 CHAPTER 4!

Sam heard Dean call him, then his vision came into focus. There was a large, old and abandoned barn filled with tools hanging along the walls. Rusty chains were hanging from all ends of the cieling, some were lower than others. The walls were lined with exaim tables that all had white sheets over them. The image then went to a man holding a knife in his hand. He walked over to one of the tables and raised the knife above his head. Sam could see strands of redish-brown hair hanging down the sides of the table. By the shape of the body, he could tell that it was a girl. She was squirming under the sheet, then the knife was plunged into her chest. The white sheet was now stained with blood, around the knife. The guy had short blonde hair and his eyes were black. The vision ended and reality was coming back into focus.
Dean- Sam?! Are you with me? *Waiting for a response*
Sam- *Holding his head and blinking a couple of times* Yeah...
He slowly got up and sat down on the couch. Bobby went into the kitchen to get him a glass of water. His brother was sitting in front of him on the coffee table, waiting for him to explain his vision.
Dean- So. What did you see?
Sam- There was a demon stabbing a girl with a knife. *Rubbing his head*
Dean- A demon?
Sam- Yeah. *Now resting his head in his hands*
Dean- Do you think it has to do with this case?
Bobby came back into the living room and handed the glass of water to Sam. Sam took a sip of the water and thanked Bobby.
Bobby- I thought you said we were dealing with a spirit? *Standing next to the couch*
Sam- We are. This is something different.
Bobby- Are you sure?
Sam- Positive. The victims here are all men, and that was definatly a girl in my vision.
Dean- It wasn't Alex was it?
Sam- No. The girl had redish-brown hair, and Alex has blonde hair.
Dean- Didn't you see her face?
Sam- No. She was covered with a white sheet. From the looks of it there was other people in there.
Bobby- How many?
Sam- I'm not sure. The walls of the barn were lined with tables.
Dean- You said a barn. Do you know where it is?
Sam- I think it was one that we passed on the way up here, by one of the rest stops back in Illinois.
Dean- So I was right. We should have stuck around Watseka a little longer.
Sam- To some degree......yes.
Dean- Yes, what? *Holding his hand behind his ear*
Sam- *Rolling his eyes* Yes Dean. You were right. You're smart and I'm dumb. Happy?
Dean- *Laughing* Victory is mine. We should go back and find that barn before that girl gets stabbed.
Bobby- Uhh guys? *The guys turn there heads at the same time* We still need to figure out who this spirit is and destroy his bones.
Sam- Right.
Dean- I guess we're going to have to split up then.
Sam- Alright. I'll go find the barn, and you can stay here with Bobby.
Bobby- Here *Handing Sam the keys to his truck* Take my truck.
Dean- Make sure you check up on Alex, when your done at the barn.
Sam- Alright. *Getting up* Well I better get going then.
Sam left in Bobby's truck, going back to Watseka. He decided that it was too late to call Alex or Cody, to see if they knew anyone with redish-brown hair. It was going to be a long five hour drive, by himself. He turned the radio on and listened to some music.
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Alex woke up in her room, with a jolt. She quickly looked around the room for Danny, but saw nobody. The sun was shining through her small window down on her bed. She flipped the sheets off of her and noticed that she didn't have any bandages or a cast on her leg. Then she quickly touched her face, feeling around for the stitches, but didn't feel any.
Alex- It was all just a dream. *Sighing with relief*
She got up and walked towards the staires, and heard a noise in the kitchen. There was a crowbar under the wooden staires, that she grabbed before going up. She slowly and carefully climbed the staires ready to swing at what was waiting for her on the other side of the door. Using her left hand to open the door she quietly walked into the hallway. She heard somebody in the kitchen and walked close to the wall, grippy the bar tighter. Something fell, which caused Alex to Swing the crowbar into the kitchen. The mystery person wasn't close enough, so the bar went into the dry-wall.
Mystery person- Alex?! What are you doing?!
Alex froze with shock at who was standing in front of her.
Alex- M-mom?!......What....I mean...how?
Mom- Alex, are you feeling alright?
Alex- Yeah...I'm great actually. *Smiling*
Mom- *A little confused* Ok....Well are you ready for school?
Alex- What?
Mom- Mitchy, Katie and Mandy will be here any minute to pick you up.
Alex- But they're....*Noticing the confusion in her mother's eyes* Nevermind.
Alex was looking around her house, and then she looked out of the window in the living room. Everything seemed so perfect. The sun was shining and there wasn't a single cloud in the sky. The neighbors dog was laying down on the front lawn.
Mom- Alex. Before you go, I need to tell you something.
Alex- *Turning around* Sure! What is it Mom?
Her mother's lips were moving, but she couldn't hear anything. She looked sad, but Alex still couldn't hear anything and was trying so hard to listen. There was a sudden knock at the door, and her mom went to answer it.
Mom- *Calling into the living room* Alex! It's for you!
Alex's mother went back into the kitchen, while Alex went to answer the door. She opened the door expecting to see her friends, but saw a man in a mask instead. He then plunged a knife into her chest.
Alex's eyes flipped open. She tried to look around, but there was something coverng her face. There was pain all over her body, and she couldn't move. She could feel the bandages on her face and the cast on her left leg.
Alex- *Quietly* That wasn't real.
Danny- No, but this is. *Pulling the sheet off of her face* Good morning princess.

6 comments:

WaRnErFaN1 said...

Awsome ud! looved it, ud!

peacejojo said...

Thanks! I will work on the other update, but it most likely won't get done untill tomorrow or thursday!

Anonymous said...

Uhhhhohhhh... Dang... My PM box was full, so I had to check to see if you updated....Dean is such a smartypants. So is Danny involved with the sheet killer

peacejojo said...

Ohhhhhhhh! I thought so!

lol He is, isn't he!

I can't give away that information yet!!! You do figure it out in the next chapter though, and it will be pretty obvious! lol ;D

SamandDeanlover1 said...

i just read the entire thing
IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!
can't wait 2 see wat happens

-Kookie(lol)

peacejojo said...

Hey, thanks Kookie! I'm going to post the next chapter in a few minutes!