Thursday, June 7, 2007

TPONTP PART 2 CHAPTER 2!

Dean and Sam had come face to face with a deer. It was just sitting there and staring at them, motionless.
Dean- *Annoyed* What's he doin'?
Sam- *Calmly* I don't know.
Dean- Why doesn't he move?
Sam- Because it's a deer and that's what they do.....Stare at people.
Dean- *Yelling at the deer* Come on! Move already!
Sam- You can't just make a deer move, Dean!
Dean- Why not?! It's in my way! I don't see a stop sign!
Sam- Yes there was!
Dean- *Confused* What?!
Sam- Yeah! There was a deer crossing sign a few miles back.
Dean- Well why didn't it cross back there?
Sam- Dean! It's a deer! They can't read! That sign was a warning that deer are in the woods and can cross the road at any time!
Dean- That's it. I'm honking the horn. *Ready to hit the horn*
Sam- DEAN!
The deer suddenly looked away from the car and ran back into the woods.
Dean- *Laughing* You scared it away!
Sam- Did not!
Dean- Whatever.*Continues to drive down the road* So, where's the next turn?
Sam- Right up ahead.
Dean- *Pointing at Sam's window* Sam!
While Sam was looking out the window, Dean stole his candy bar and ate it.
Dean- *laughing* Man, that was way too easy!
Sam- *Realizing what happend* Will you grow up?
Dean- *While eating* Will you shut up?
Dean made the turn and they were driving down a narrow gravel road, that was wide enough for one car. They then turned left into the driveway of a log cabin. Dean slowly drove down the hill towards the house and parked his car. They pulled their stuff out of the trunk and knocked on the door to the cabin. Bobby answered the door and let them in right away.
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Back in Watseka Alex was sitting in her living thinking about the past few days. Alex's dad was making dinner for the two of them. He felt bad, because there wasn't much he could do, so he made her favorite meal. Normally the house was quiet, but tonight it was an awkward silence.
Dad- Dinners ready! *Yelling into the living room*
Alex- *Wheeling into the dinning room*
She was clearly depressed, by the look on her face. Ever since the doctor took the tape off of her mouth, she was quiet. The feeling of loneliness was thrown upon her. How was she supposed to move on, when she knew it was all her fault? Nobody understood what it was like. There was just two friends left in her life, Cody and Brad. There's also Sam and Dean, but she didn't know anything about them.
Dad- *Noticing that his daughter wasn't eating* Aren't you going to eat?
Alex- *Slowly picking up her fork and began eating*
Dad- Cody called earlier. *He waited for a response, but didn't get one* She's going to come over tonight. She said that she rented a movie, for you guys to watch.
Alex- *Still not answering her dad*
Her face was expressionless and she was barely eating anything.
Dad- Alex...I can't even begin to........If you ever want to talk about it...I'll listen.
Alex- *She stopped eating and nodded her head*
Her dad was releaved, because she finally answered him. It was just a nod, but it was better than nothing. He gave her a soft smile, then they finished the rest of their meal in complete silence.
Dad- It's time for your pain medication.
He grabbed her pills that were sitting on the counter, and took out one pill. He put it down in front of her and got her a glass of water.
Alex- *Staring at the pill and water*
Dad- Alex, you need to take them.
Alex- *Looking away*
Dad- Please? It'll help with the pain.
Alex- *Shaking her head*
Dad- Ale-
There was a knock at their front door. He opened the door to let Cody in.
Dad- *Yelling to Alex from the front hallway* Alex, Cody's here!
Cody- *Walking into the dinning room* Hey Alex. I brought us a funny movie to watch.
Dad- *Talking to Cody* I'm gonna go do the dishes. I'll be in my office later if you guys need anything.
Cody- Okey dokey. *Turning towards Alex* So, do you want to go into the living room?
Alex- *Nodding her head and going into the living room*
Cody- *Following Alex* Hey, I had a question for ya!
Alex- Hmm?
Cody- Did you think that cop was cute? The one that was at my house.
Alex- *Stopping in the living room and raising an eyebrow at Cody*
Cody- What?! I thought he was! Didn't you?
Alex- He's my cousin Cody.
Cody- Sweet! He's allllllll mine!
Alex shook her head and parked her chair next to the couch. Cody turned the tv on, and changed the channel from the news to watch the movie.
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Meanwhile; across the street the Barkers were watching the news.
Ankor man- Last night there was a terrible car crash, involving a car and a truck. There was a teenage girl in the car, that survived the crash with severe injuries. Her car had flipped over and smahed into a tree. The other vehicle was so severly damaged, that the cops say it was a miracle that the driver was able to leave the truck. The police are still investigating the scene. We'll keep you updated-
*Click*
Bill- Honey, what's for dinner?
Nancy- I'M BUSY! MAKE IT YOURSELF! YOU GOT TWO HANDS!

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow funny great ud skippy you forgive me and tink yet?

peacejojo said...

Thanks! I try to be! lol

Maybe! I'll have to sleep on it!

WaRnErFaN1 said...

Hey awsome ud! Love how the new stroy is coming along! more!!!!!!!!

peacejojo said...

Thanks Freak! I'll try to post more soon within the next couple of days!

Anonymous said...

Hey PJ! Will Alex find out the secret? Will Dean steal another candy bar? Will the deer scare the crap out of Dean? Stay tuned for the next update in Chapter 3.

peacejojo said...

haha! Awesome preview GG!
I can answer those actually!

Yes, but I'm not sure when! Definalty not the next chapter! Sorry!

Maybe! lol

umm...Maybe! lol

Anonymous said...

That was funny! my favorite part:

Dean- That's it. I'm honking the horn. *Ready to hit the horn*
Sam- DEAN!
The deer suddenly looked away from the car and ran back into the woods.
Dean- *Laughing* You scared it away!
Sam- Did not!
Dean- Whatever.*Continues to drive down the road*

I dunno that had me cracking up!!! I read the rest great job!!! I can't believe that guy wasn't dead!! Dumb demons...lol

peacejojo said...

lol thanks Cliffy! I liked that part too!